| "The Baby Bet" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: i love it five stars
Reviewed By: gothicangel2 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2008 18:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT! this fanfic was really funny too bad there arnt many pictures with kagome and naruto in them if you could find pictures like this could you give me the site besides photobucket. i love this fanfic it was so funny and with all the triangles it was hillarious i loved it cant wait till you write the sequel you are are on my favirote authors now yay!
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Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 13:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
please write a seqil...i suck at big AND small words!XD
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Reviewed By: inu 4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2007 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz make a sequel with the families making more childs and this time the Uchiha's win the bet. And the girls get revenge by making the boys watch over the childs. Okay, maybe thats too evil, but make a sequel wouldya?!!
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Title: Review #1
Reviewed By: Fanfactor [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 19:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Here are ur 2 reviews just update and check spelling
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Title: Baby bet
Reviewed By: sessyfan101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'd loved this story it was very enjoyable to read and I hope u add more chapters or something.
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz continue
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Reviewed By: missingnin0x0 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a grat story, but I want you to go onto where Naruto and Kagome have to raise their children. I'm not a mean person, but I want to see Naruto and Sasuke suffer for the bet that they made. I feel really bad for Naruto, not only does he have to be hokage to the village, but he has to help raise seven children, and get 2 girls through puberty. You really have to write it
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Reviewed By: armybrat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awesome... update soon!!!!
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