| "Mystery of the History" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
| Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
Reviewed By: Monk-Miko On: May 20, 2009 00:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just wondering if you will ever start on this story again. It looks like it would be good. I just hope that you continue it even though you have not written another chapter for a long time. Hope you continue.
|
Reviewed By: RainLily13 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2009 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhh it's been almost TWO YEARS since you last updated!! You're evil!! 'pouts' this is such a unique and cute story!! And funny to boot!! if you do happen to continue this, make it a Naruto/Kagome pairing!! There's not nearly enough!! This fic has a LOT of potential, and could eventually turn out to be one great story. I like Naruto's personality... he seems perceptive and more wise than what is let on. Other fics just set him up as a not too smart ninja that thinks everything is a joke or prank Kagome I just straight out love! She's so adorable!! It was... unusual... at the beginning to find out Kagome was a kitty person, but I got attached to the idea very quickly. Ahhhh!! I keep on wondering what might happen next... who else would find out about Kagome? How did she get that way? Is there any significance to the scars? Is she ever going to speak?! Oh! And when will Kagome and Naruto fall in love?!? 'wink' 'sigh' I really do hope you continue this, I would love to read some more. And if you are definetly not in any way possible.. may I suggest putting this up for adoption? That way your creative idea will be continued and readers will finally see how the story continues? But that's only if your positive that you will discontinue this of course. I would much rather perfer you to continue this since you came up with it. Well that's it I guess... again! Please consider to continue this! It would be such a shame to see this go to waste! A beautiful job well done!! Hope to hear from you soon!! Take care, RainLily
|
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Blackrosebunny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. What an awesome story so far! I really do hope for an update soon! It's got a lot of potential. I really do wish to read the rest of the story if you'll update!
|
Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
WILL YOU PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY DAMN IT its been over 2 months since yo last updated I am sorry to say this but please get off your ass and update this story hell since your last update till now you could have updated atleast 3 or 4 times since the chapters aren`t that big BUT NO look your story is really good hell I would love it even more if this a Nauto/Kagome pairring but that if IF you will actually update anyways PLEASE UPDATE YOUR STORY SOON and make it really long since you don`t like to update often enough
|
Reviewed By: yer lil demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
definataly naruto/kagome!^_^
|
Reviewed By: Gina_031552 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I vote for Naruto/Kagome pairing of course. Beside there is way too many Sasuke/Kagome and Itachi/Kagome pairing. Anyway, I like your story much.
|
Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 17:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the story and I would love to see how Kagome looks in your story and I vote for the pairring to be Naruto and Kagome and if you pair Kagome to somebody other than Naruto I will stop reading so please make it Naruto and Kagome ONLY and PLEASE WILL YOU UPDATE THE STORY and not wait to update once a monthor once every other month oh well I doubt it I doubt this story will b updated anytime soon
|
Reviewed By: TShrieken [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 18:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! Please please please please!!! update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!! Update soon!!!
|
Reviewed By: i dont know On: May 29, 2007 01:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Unique. Please update soon and add alittle humor.
|
Reviewed By: yokagome_youko_sesshomaru4ever On: May 27, 2007 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm not very good at xplaning things but i loved it it should be naruto kagome paring
|
Title: Rauko_Arisha
Reviewed By: Rauko_Arisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
CUTE!!!! i love this story, please make it a naruto/kagome pairing please, please, please. I'll love you forever. update soon.
|
Reviewed By: dejaz On: May 24, 2007 01:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwww!!! i love it! lemons in the future?
|
Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 15:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
So far I like your story it looks like it is going to be really good and for the pairring I think you already know who I want Kagome to be paired up with and that is with Naruto ad nobody else but I have a feeling everybody is going to want it to be Sasuke and Kagome to be paired up and I say hell no there are way and I mean way to many Sasuke everybody thinks is a GOD and Kagome pairring that and there are to many Kagome and Itachi and Kagome and Gaara pairring there is also a couple of Neji and Kagome pairring but there is hardly ever any Naruto and Kagome pairring so whats what I would love to read PLEASE could yo make it that pairring even if you don`t and that would suck I would stll read your story so PLEASE make it a Naruto and Kagome pairring pretty please and also update soon no hurry
|
Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: HalfBlackWolfDemon (nli) On: May 21, 2007 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! i luved it! and Kagome-chan is so kawaii! *squeals* i hope u update soon! ur story is very unique and original, and could go far! Mee-chan
|
Reviewed By: Bloodcherry [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 21:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
*whistle*.... This is really original!! I love it! XD I can imagine Kagome like that and it's just way to cute......!!!!!!!! DAMN HER!! *laughs*... That reminds me of something.... Anime convention... *cracks up laughing* Anyway! Pay no mind to my insane mood swings, ne? *evil grin* I can't wait to know the way Sakura and Tsunade will react! Hehehehe... I hope you can update soon! Ja ne, Bloodcherry
|
| Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] |
