| "Black Widow Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 506 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ariana/N-M-S-15 On: June 13, 2009 15:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is using a friend's laptop* Oh my god! Kells, that cliffhanger nearly killed me! This story is incredible and I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 02:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW MAN I HATE THIS CLIFF HANGER~!! what about hiei?! damn this is gonna kill me until u get the next chapter out anyways, it's official this is the BEST story i have ever read, honestly this story has EVERYTHING in it, and every chapter just got better and better and this chapter was plain awesome i loved hiei and kurama's fight scene that was cool i really feel bad for hiei though when is everyone gonna find our that he and kagome together, she's pregnant with HIS children, and that kagome was never in any kind of relationship with kurama i wonder what's gonna happen next please update again soon!!! i dont think i could wait for months for an update to see what happens next with everyone finding out that kagome is pregnant and if they find out about hiei so please update soon. PRETTY PLEASE?! *puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2009 23:18 EDT
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I am so glad to see that you have updated Black Widow Miko. I was having such a terrible night and then I came home the next morning and I saw there was an update. It really cheered me up. You see, I had come home the previous night to find a lot of my stuff lost and missing, compliments of my niece and her mother. I share a room with my niece and her mother decided to rearrange while I was gone. Several pieces of my jewelry were missing, jewelry that my boyfriend gave me and that was left to me by relatives whom have passed on. My niece decided to tell me that I could either leave or deal with it. You see, I wasn't taking the loss too well, especially since the entire day I was kept in bed by my boyfriend because I was not feeling well. And so, I left, planning on spending the night outside to cool off so I didn't yell at her. Though she insisted on bothering me about coming in so that she didn't catch pneumonia when I got it. It ended up that my boyfriend (who's seventeen) refused to let me sleep outside and after calming me enough, talked me into staying at his house. So he came over and got me, though in the morning I was still very upset, I was calmed enough that I would not explode at either of them. When I got home and saw your update though, it got me to smile as I read it. It made me feel a lot better after everything, though I am still not over being sick from the day before when my boyfriend made me stay in bed all day. And I am still upset over the room since most of my clothing seems to have disappeared, along with many other things. Thank-you for updating your story when you did, and I am unable to wait for the next wonderful chapter that you post. Chrystal-Hearts
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Reviewed By: Yue no Rei On: June 04, 2009 08:19 EDT
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Oh man, despite the wait.. good job. I really want to smack Kurama right now. Aha, sorry gor the shortness of the review, my brain needs to digest everything now XDDD
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Reviewed By: jen9 On: June 04, 2009 07:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok it is SO SO Shippou who killed her mates! he can shape change (illusions, he is a good fighter, all of her mates would have trusted him implicitly, he knows poisons and he is possesive and he offered to court Kagome! it's him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the story so far! hope you up date quicker! i hope Hiei gets over what jelously he's feeling! Ja Ne Jenna
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Reviewed By: taixi On: June 04, 2009 03:47 EDT
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oh my, I am so worried you're making Shippo the villain here. I might have written as much in a prior review but now I really get that sense...who else would be jealous of all the husbands, plus have easy access; it's an Oedipus complex...well either way (if I'm right or wrong) it's an intriguing plot. Thanks for writing!
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 20:23 EDT
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damn i simply love this story!! the mystery part of this is makes it really interesting i think kagome's mates deaths had something to do with kikyo but idk for sure i'll just havta keep reading to find out
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 19:29 EDT
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Woooooo! I was so excited when I checked in and you had actually UPDATED! And wow, was it ever worth the wait. Sometimes when a story takes a long time to come out, you lose track of what was going on--not so BWM. I even skipped the "end of last chapter" recap and I was still right there and ready to go. ^_^ I'm not going to lie to you...I'm a Kurama fan in most stories...but even I thought he had this coming, and I'm glad they duked it out. As they both said, it was a long time coming. This chapter seems to have been kind of a turning point, at least as far as the mystery goes. I wonder what exploring this new avenue will bring. Out of time, but I'll get back to you later I'm sure. Cheers!
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Title: ch review and reply
Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 19:03 EDT
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nah i didn't read until ch16 yet i just finished this chapter XD but im usin all the time i have online readin this story ur doing a fantastic job btw this fanfic has EVERYTHING in it i think that's why i like it so much
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2009 15:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is simply amazing!! it'd really, REALLY good it's my absolute favorite story right now! the story line and plot is really well done nell everything about this is well done!! and each chapter gets better and better
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 22:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just became apart of this site and this is the first story i read so far i usually go on a different site for fanfics... ANYWAYS... this is really good so far!! i love it i haven't read anything like this in an inuyasha fanfic so it's different from anything else i've read great job!
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Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 19:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! WHAT THE HELL IS THIS!!!! THAT MOTHERFCKING BASTARD!!! Damn you Kurama!!! pleeeeaaaasse let Kagome just set everything straight!!! PLLEEASE!!! Once again you've written an awesome chapter and I really enjoyed it! But seriously... im going to lose my mind if Kurama keeps this shit up..
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Reviewed By: LadyNorth76 On: June 02, 2009 18:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon! I loved it.
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Title: Avid-Rabid
Reviewed By: **too lazy to log in** On: June 02, 2009 14:33 EDT
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ahhhh! you dont know how many times i have squealed, or cried, or plain old laughed out loud since i started reading this fic. at certain points i was so happy it felt like someone was giving my heart a hug, not me, my heart. like someone had reached in and was like "i love you so much" :huggle:... fantastic. and then when i saw that there wasnt another chapter to read i litereally screamed... ive been up for the past 25 and a half hours reading your story (good thing i dont have to go to work tomorrow), and i would gladly have said up even longer if it ment i had more of this story to read. please hurry and update. i am begging you, with the most sincerest part of my heart. from the very beginning i have been intrigued with how this story was gonna develope, because the plot is just so epic, there are so many things that need to happen still, so many fights, and you are a brillient writter... i know im gushing, but i cant bring myself to stop, i cant bring myself to care to stop. you must update soon, for my sake. because once ive read a fantastic story thats not finished i begin pouring over all of the other storys looking for one that is half as good as this one. unfortunatly they are hard to come by. especially cross overs... i wasnt even in the mood for a Kagome/Hiei, id been going through a hardcore Kagome/Inu Yasha phase for quite a while now, but youve got me. youve got my attention... so one more time, just to be sure you heard me... once more, for the road, update soon please.
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Reviewed By: landofthekwt [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2009 01:19 EDT
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Congratulations on completing another chapter. It appears that progress is being made toward solving the case and the boys plan to take their father's places is going forward. Kagome's marriage and her pregnancy are finally out in the open.
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