| "Somes very specials cares" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayBear32 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2007 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As you sia good writer that english is not your native tongue. I have forgiven any mistakes on that end and would be very pleased if you would add more to this story. I thank you for your time and hope you will read what I have written.
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Reviewed By: sasukelover132 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY DID YOU STOP!!!
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Title: Nice.
Reviewed By: Chaoswizkid [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
A nice fic. I hope to see more. I don't really like the way you seperated your words, but I can live with it. Nice pairing start, a bit sudden though. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: twisted_demon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 16:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why Did You Stop
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Reviewed By: narusaku_69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 08:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice!!! but you could seperate words from actions by using thses ""...
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