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"Nevermind that..." Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: Indreamland4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 29, 2007 21:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
you didn't have enough details. a little something about each character. how they feel, they look, the flow of words is pretty much missing. try putting the words into paragraphs. it'll be easier for the readers to read.
 Reviewed By: Fennec Fox Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 16, 2007 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'd say you still need some practicing with your punctuation marks.

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