| "Halted Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 (not logged in) On: April 19, 2007 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i really love your story and all but i have a bit of a suggestion. it might not be as catchy but "mirai" is usually used for future. so...mirai queen serenity? i know it sounds kinda...off, but like i said just a thought. you don't have to change your entire story ^^. i mean it's awesome! i love it! chibiusa is sailor for moon and earth...the epitome of the union between her parents *flicks a tear*. very sweet. great use of symbolism!
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Moonlight Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way this is turning out! One for Earth and the Moon. Brilliant!
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Reviewed By: Moonlight Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ilke this very much. It is really interesting and I enjoyed reading it! So Small Lady has another transformation! Can't wait to see her new powers in action! Jut one question: does she get an upgrade as the fiction goes on? Sorry, just curious! Nice work and the next chapter please! When you're ready of course!
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