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| "Trial By" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Guilty Justice!
| Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Master Nemesis [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 04:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, I find myself applauding you. I've been a fan of your writing for the past few months now, and often find myself hoping to discover a story alert from you waiting in my e-mail whenever I log on. As such, I was happy to find one today and, as you often do, you did not disappoint my expectations. Though this particular piece doesn't surpass some of your other fiction, like ITDR and 'Shinji Just Snaps,' it still makes for great reading. As Psycho Z said, it might have been better if more time had been dedicated to writing it, but nonetheless I enjoyed it. Also, though I enjoy the angst and sadness that is integral to most of your stories, I'd love to see you produce another fic like SJS, which almost had me falling out of my chair with laughter. Anyway, whatever you plan to write next, I look forward to reading your next submission eagerly.
| Reviewed By: Psycho_Z [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm, don't quite understand the ending. I mean, why would she do that? Still, the intial concept is pretty amusing but it's only expanded on so much. It's pretty obvious this was written in a hour and is a very quick read. Still, I liked it but it probably would have been better had a little more time been devoted to it.
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