| "Faith in Humanity" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 05:12 CST
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what do i like . everything,except the fact that i have to scroll all the way to and from the author notes to read them.why not simply put what you need to say in parenthesis next to what needs explaining
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Reviewed By: naruto rules [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 18:53 CST
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his name is minato namikaze
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 17:22 CDT
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I really really like this story I love that Naruto does have family that is still alive even if it is just an Aunt atleast it is still family I kinda liked the bloodline were he can see the future but the thing is if he can see the future why cann`t he change it if it is going to be bad and Ido like to read some stories where Naruto is very strong ad I like Naruto and Hinata pairring but I do wish that ppl would write stories where Naruto is paired up with a girl other than Hinata all the time it just seems to me that pp don`t want to be different by making the same old pairring and if they are different then the make a story where Naruto is paired up with a guy instead of a girl oh god I am rambling again anyways I really like your story and I was wondering when are you going to post Restoration of Faith because I cann`t wait to read it PLEASE POST IT SOON and I hope you didn`t just post it only on FF.net and not on MM.org then I guess I won`t be able to read then since FF.net suck because it won`t let me in oh well
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 16:10 CDT
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I hate to say it but you screwed up in chapter 8 by saying team 8 came to help when Ino is on team 10 Hinata is on team 8 thats all and man these chapter are very very very long
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 16:22 CDT
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I was wonder are you going to give Naruto a bloodline limit of his own like in the story called BloodLines and by the way at the end of chapter 5 you talked about that story and you hope the author doesn`t get ma or something lke that what I say is screw him that author hasn`t even touched his or her story in over a year now and I doubt it will ever get updated or finished oh yeah I forgot to say I really really like your story so far kepp up the great work
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 21:02 CDT
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Ok, STARR*, you must not pay much attention to what you read. In other words, FUCK OFF BITCH! Thank you.
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God I just finished reading this story and is awesome I can't wait for the continuation.
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Reviewed By: STARR* On: April 15, 2007 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are such a contradiction. First you wite how Naruto doesn't trust anyone then in the span of a few days trusts Haku completly. And you keep changing Naruto's character, first he was an untrusting prick, then he was a blood thursty killer, then apologetic about helping Sasuke climb trees. MAKE UP YOUR MIND! Also NO ONE improves as fast as Sasuke and Sakura did. Also your writing style is horrible, you just skim over things without going into any detail at all, it's horrible. I had to force myself to read past the second chapter and now I refuse to read any further because you can't seen to settle on a plot. This is not a flame. I am just expressing my views and opinions.
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Reviewed By: perfect little girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 19:59 CDT
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awsome story!!!! i love it PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! it's very interseting and i'm putting it on my favs list !! :)
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 19:35 CDT
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This story rocks keep it coming.
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