| "Vengeance is a Dish" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Korisovra [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2007 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well written, thought out and plotted. I would definitely like to see a continuation.
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Title: Forethought
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 23:18 CDT
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Overall, a very interesting story. Unfortunately, Ranma's lack of any military training, much less weapons training, renders it more than a little unbelievable. To have Ranma handle the weapons you've supplied him with even remotely effectively, he would have required training from professionals. It's extremely difficult to learn all that would have been required in only six months, and that's WITH professional instruction. My recommendation to improve the story would be...have Ranma serve in the U.S. military for about six years, either Marines or Army Rangers. And then have him return to Nerima after close to ten years.
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Reviewed By: Priest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 14:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
an interesting premmis, i would like to see more in the futre.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 05:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Huh. Personally, I thought this one mighta just been a one shot. Oh well. I do think the story is realistic. But otherwise, I'm not a fan. Whatever.
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Reviewed By: Havoc80 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man..what can I say, I don't think I have ever read a story that has been this original, well in the Ranma universe that is. I also want to say that I hope you continue soon. as I want to know what other fun stuff you will have in store for him and the girls.
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 14:15 CDT
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Kuno got what he deserved. I hope this is continued. It was sad what happened to Akane though.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 21:34 CDT
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A nice bloddy mass of a fic though I missed what had happened to Shampoo. Still I was a bit pissed Akane died, I have always thought he'd end up with one or all of the tendo girls. Still a nice slash for the day! dennisud
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