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"Dances with Werewolves" Reviews/Comments [ 1 ]
 Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 10, 2007 09:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heh. "Changing rooms." You've got a question mark missing here and there and unless you're playing by British rules, the single and double quotes always come after the period or comma. Your girlfriend is a werebunny! Oh lovely. But how did Lena know to order the Peter Rabbit special before she came in? Werewolves of London; one of the great single-riff songs. This piece has a lot of good short moments in it and a pretty decent frame. My hat is duly doffed. Len and Lena are the same dude, aren't they? Attractive or not, Paul is a stupid jerk. Why would a smart chick/non-chick like Lena and or Len be interested?

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