| "Riverside Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Hayashi Panthera [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha! it figures most of the loud ones secretly want to be dominated and they know it! Anyway I finally read the first part to Origin and it kinda explains alot so I'm glad i read it! It was a pretty good one-shot but you could have put a little more info on how Ino and Naruto hooked up in this one shot though or you could make a whole new one but then that could be a tad bit confusing but hey it's your story and a damned good one at that! anyway hope you update Origin soon oh and I hope you add in Hinata in the harem soon!!
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 10:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting. Never took Ino to be the submissive type. Always figured she'd be the one wearing the pants in a relationship.
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