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Title: Update already! -from Lauren
Reviewed By: Kenshinfan230 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 21:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Come on Bri....u could have atleast updated by now...and u still need to send me that other fanfic we were working on together.......i wanna finish it! ~Lauren ^_~
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Title: Could use some technique....
Reviewed By: ManMadePsyco [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 18:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I don't like the layout, it's a good concept. Also, I think the chapter's could be longer, that, and it seems like the story's going a little too fast... Paragraphs should be longer.....etc.
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Reviewed By: Chikaaa [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol~! this is just awsome thats all i can say xD
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Title: Hi!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Kenshinfan230 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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