| "A Child's Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: silverfeather [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 20:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this was the most adorable story. im glad kagome came back and that everyones happy. wow, i wish now that i had a daughter like takara. except, well, im only 15 and i want a boy. but enough of that, awesome job, and im looking forward to reading the rest of your fics!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 04:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sad at first but wonderful story... really liked it... cute and sweet... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: Chimeara [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic... i just dont understand why other writers cant be as good as you in writing fics.... oh well.... and once again i compliment you on your fic... i was nearly in tears again.
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Reviewed By: ji-an [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 15:36 CDT
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OH i was almost in tears when I read this! IT's so sweet and adorable! I wanted to cry! Reading a short, simple and sugary story like this is refreshing once in a while! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Hitsugaya630 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 00:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think yo should write another part to this! its so god! I LOVE IT! PLEASE WRITE MORE!! PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSS!!!
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Reviewed By: nicoleroman On: July 11, 2007 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you should write more to this. I think it ends to soon. I mean what happens to the son Kichiro. Which is a cute name by the way.
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Title: write more
Reviewed By: jhoceline On: June 11, 2007 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey are u thinking of writing more part of the story to a childs wish with inuyasha and the rest of the gang!!!...
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Reviewed By: @___@ On: May 14, 2007 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story screams cuteness!! What a sad beginning but such a happy ending. I LOVE IT. Too bad it coudln't be longer >
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Reviewed By: vkp23 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 20:23 CDT
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AWWWWW! What a cute story! Short and very sweet! I do like long stories but a good short one totally floats my boat. Great job! It would be cute to see some antics little Takara and kichiro could get into! Keep writing. I'm also looking foward to your continuation of "Home for Kagome". That was a great one too.
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was cute cute cute! I loved it! Just perfect! GREAT JOB!
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Reviewed By: AmiFire Chopstixx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 23:21 CDT
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that was soooo goood! lol and the ending was hilarious! :] haha Takara is soooo cuuuuttteegood job!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww, so cute! it was great and you should really write a sequel w/ some other stuff. yea, Takara was pretty cute... and Kichiro sounded cute too! Write more!
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Reviewed By: LadyCash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2007 04:42 CDT
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Great story, Takara was too cute. So glad I/K were reunited. Love your writing style, very enjoyable and easy to read. Just watch the tense, sometimes it switched mid-paragraph. Otherwise, can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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