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| "Gran Pas De Deux" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 09:46 CDT
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so.. are you gonna write more to this? (boy am i the hipocrite, i havent updated in ages either) cos im really reeeally wanting to see what happens ^^
| Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dont see Shadow as completely evil as such, hes my favourite character. but i know for a fact he isn't good. thats why i disagree with the StH 2006. he wouldnt work for GUN. i see him as neutral, doing what he wants with little regard to feelings or anything, i think the only reason he left the Earth alive is because Maria wanted it and that is reflected in my fictions. i like him to be the bad guy in short.******** (that divides from my reply) still get smiles about the whole Cream thing, it just amuses me how shes doing as much as he can to avoid being with her and they just push em together.^^ Ha! Tails is more or less being dragged into being with the Rabbit. Ha!(again) Tails likes Ballet! its so feminine. how has no-one figured out shes a girl yet? shes not very good at hiding it is she? i wouldn't be surprised if Shadow knew already. Shes about to slap Rouge after all. and Shadow watching over her? aww..cuteness. and Shadow shows his softy side later on. finally those breasts youve popped on the end. they will cause some trouble wont they. keep updating this fiction please (somewhat faster would be nice ^^) i really really really love it. now i just want to know this, what is your opinion on Lemon scenes? a bit early i know but im interested on which approach you will take. i only wish there was a rating higher than 10, it doesn't seem right that other fics can get the same rating as this one when no other could make me smile the same way.
| Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2007 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chap2 review: Tails ballet? That makes me smile for some reason, especialy in a tutu! you guys make me giggle. Amy -Boys are weird- is funny, a do like how Cream has a crush on a girl without knowing it, not XXX or anything. i just find it funny that she doesn't realise. very heart to heart with Tails and Rouge, that why i dont support Shadrouge, they are like brother and sister. good emotional scenes with Sonic and Shadow cuteness too. i cant wait for the romance things. all together a good enjoyable chapter. i do wander what happened to Shadow though, hes a bit nicer to others than usual. oh well theres plenty of evil Shadow fics around i suppose i can take a slightly OC one, good work and i hope you never stop. ever. keep working until you go blind and have to feel the keys.
| Title: hmm
Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
not bad i must say
| Reviewed By: Lunarian unlogged On: April 26, 2007 16:23 CDT
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Geez don't go tellin someone I'll review sumthin, I coulda hated it. I don't hate it per say, but it really has too much of a highschool fic to it. The whole Sonic cast hanging out at Tails like its an everyday thing, and listenin to music... I cant recall them ever once having that type of party atmosphere.And where'd Tikal come from? Is this a total AU or is she projected out of the master emerald? Things are being mentioned here with no backstory. Is there supposed to have been a history of Shadow/Tails interaction here or is Tails sudden crush just now, cause it seems soo sudden its jarring. Plus Shadow helping... although it could be him just tryin to get away from Sonic and the sickening antics of Knuckles. Even if Tails is female... I don't see the whole ballet thing, I mean where would she find the time or privacy to learn it. I like how you don't have Tails angst or anythin about Creams teary face, just a simple regret then back to usual. I wonder if Shadow knows Tails is a girl here, his actions and thoughts seem to say it. Oh well, Shadow got to tell off Tikal and Amy in the same day, thats a good day.
| Title: Shails
Reviewed By: Shadow 6271 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 14:18 CDT
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I hope this will be a really long, well done Shails, if so you can probably expect a guy called Lunarian to be reviewing too, hes the only guy who reviews my fic. anyway, i think its a bit too early to tell how good it is but im definitly going to ba reading more, i love it for some reason i have yet to identify. i just do. : ) just i hope you two manage to keep Shadow In character, its a pain (i know from experience) but it has to be done for a real Shad romance fiction. youve done well so far, lets hope the next author can.
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