| "Naruto vs. Sasuke The Aftermath" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: Iluvsasuke6464 On: February 03, 2011 20:11 EST
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Hey I lived ur story but could you write another chapter? |
Reviewed By: Venus914 On: August 30, 2010 06:42 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually love your story because im a naru/hina fan. I despise Sakura too. Anyways, Yondaime is not a name of the 4th Hokage. Yondaime is actually like a number which translates to THE FOURTH. Hokage is the title. Shodaime - The First Nidaime - The Second Sandaime - The Third Yondaime - The Fourth Godaime - The Fifth Rokudaime - The Sixth Nanadaime - The Seventh. And so on and so forth. Another thing, i love how Hinata is so protective of Naruto but i hate it when it's so over the top that it's not even possible anymore. Hitting Kakashi, snapping at Kurenai, getting angry at Tsunade...she should have been punished for blatant disrespect.
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Title: Naruto
Reviewed By: DevilInTheFlesh [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2010 22:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed reading this
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2010 01:04 EDT
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I am torn between hating your story (and you) and loving it. It is so well written and you are so good at building up tension and drama and ripping out emotions. I thought kakashi died i wanted to cry and hurt you all at once. I thought hinata died, you have me on pins and needles hell i thought more than once kakashi had died and others were going to die or not arrive in time. I love this it is a work of art to evoke so many strong emotions. I can't wait for your next update and this is going on my fave list.
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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2010 03:20 EDT
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hell yeah i know who your talking about in your authors note in chapter 14. One of the best and toughest.
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Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaverr On: May 11, 2010 08:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this story, since about chapter 6 was published, and I was very happy to see it updated, as it is one of the few tales i've acctually taken to following in this genre. While grammar and spelling are not always perfect the story has been very enjoyable and the character portrayals of sasuke and sakura pre shippuuden are to my mind entirely believable.
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Reviewed By: jasgag [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2010 19:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great, thank you for writing it,i have been waiting for another chapter to come out, keep on writing it is very good. thank you again. great story and excellent plot
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Reviewed By: Yasha512 On: April 15, 2010 03:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story and if you do have the ability to upload it still plz do for you do have at least one fan still around who wants to read the rest.
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Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2009 13:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story alot I hope you will add more soon.
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Reviewed By: GamerJay of FF.Net On: February 27, 2009 00:41 EST
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I'm not telling you how you should write your own story, but I need to get this off my chest... Damn it, something better not happen to Hinata and Kurenai, otherwise this story is ruined for me. Something this well written shouldn't feature any more debauchery than what was already inflicted on Sakura...especially for a sweet girl such as Hinata and a strong woman like Kurenai. I can tell this story is going to be long, so I think it would be great if you started killing off the enemy and appeasing our bloodlust. First the small time (Kabuto, Oto Ninja), the middle-men (Hiahi, Ishi, Danzo) and finally the big-fish(Sasuke, Orochimaru), and then all that's left is Akatsuki. You know, I wonder how Itachi would handle seeing how his brother has completely gone insane? Because last I checked that not what he wanted for him... Nicely written. And once again, I'm not telling you how to write your own fic, but please...no more vile, debauched stuff happening to anyone. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: blue wolf On: February 18, 2009 15:30 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is great. I can not want to see what happends next. It is like watching the show its self. I can not wait until the next chapter is up. Please keep up the good work and please up date soon. Thank you and have a nice day.
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Reviewed By: gerodumus prime [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2009 14:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
execellent work my friend please get to work on the next chapter at once
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Title: aftermath
Reviewed By: Silvermisttaleweaver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2009 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story for quite some time, and was checking for updates the day before this chapter went up. i was very glad to see it. I've been enjoying this one and had worried it would not update again, given the time between updates. keeep working at it, this story is surely worth seeing through.!
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Reviewed By: naruharemlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2009 15:51 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the story so far exept that i dont like rape and i love what you makes gai say i think that he sounds like one of the knights from the medieval times
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Reviewed By: fes On: January 26, 2009 00:13 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just wanted to say i think this fic is awesome and i aprieciate all the work you put into it and i look forward to reading the next chapter thank you
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