| "Bonds Of Brotherhood" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 01:00 CDT
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Thats cool if there are no pairring and for this chapter it was cool you updated but the chapter was really short sorry for complainning other than that the story is good so far so please update soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2007 22:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Come on and PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 17:21 CDT
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That was a cool chapter I was wondering how come he hasn`t gone and joined up with Naruto couple years ago then wait till nowoh wellI really like the story I think this actually the first story I read where Naruto has a older brother it is usually an older sister or aunt there is a story I ave been reading called Trickster where Naruto`s mother and older sister are still alive but they were told he died and his father when he was sealing the nine tails I think something happened where his father had become the nine tails and he is sealed inside on Naruto and in that stoary team seven is made up of Naruto ,Hinata and Sasuke and of course the pairring is Naruto and Hinata oh yeah by the way will there be any pairrings in your story if so can I make a suggestion for a pairring and that would be since Naruto is older now and his frends sees how he is the pairring I would suggest is well it is actually between 3 girls Naruto and Ino or Naruto and Tenten or Naruto and Temari those are my suggestion since you don`t see many of those pairring oh wel keep up the good work and update soon please
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 13:31 CDT
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So far I like the story well you keep spelling Iruka wrong you spelled it Irluca oh well it kinda suck the chapters are kinda short but thats ok I just hope that your going to update this story anytime soon because I want to know what happen next so please update soon
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Reviewed By: white_ninja_hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
pretty good! :)
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, interesting start to this. Update soon.
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