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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: bax0wee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 23:41 PDT
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this chapter was sooo perfect! i was anticipating how bulma and vegeta will act once they reunit again after all these years.. well, you surely left me satisfied :] great chapter, great story.. can't wait for the next one to come out !! vegeta chained to bulmas bed, AWWW !!!! this chapter was sooo perfect! i was anticipating how bulma and vegeta will act once they reunit again after all these years.. well, you surely left me satisfied :] great chapter, great story.. can't wait for the next one to come out !! vegeta chained to bulmas bed, AWWW !!!! please hurry with the updates !!! please hurry with the updates !!!
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Reviewed By: keleosnoonna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 06:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I'm glad you updated! Mmmm... i can't wait to see how their relationship is going to develop! you're amazing and never cease to surprise me! good job!
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Title: free-sprit - not logged in
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 21:46 PDT
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I love this story, simply just love it. Loved the first one to. Update soon!!!!
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Title: Finally an update!!
Reviewed By: Aralyn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 20:35 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so beautiful. i have been waiting forever for this story to update and it was magnificient. i love this story! ~Aaralyn~
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Title: rock!
Reviewed By: luvyoubraandgoten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 11:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic rocks! ur great and i cant wait till u continue!
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Title: Again! Again!
Reviewed By: guyan0/katie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 11:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it "totemo" (japanese for fantasic. So Good I had to learn a new word to describe it. I think I may have to learn another for the next chapter if Vegeta going to be "bedridden" shall we say?
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Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 00:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter!
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Reviewed By: Sandy02 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been following for years, and just caught up again. I
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Reviewed By: Izandria Johnson [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 15:57 PDT
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I so agree that the monthly update is torturous! This story is so awesome, I can't wait to see what will happen when Vegeta wakes up.
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 12:40 PDT
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first off fanfrinkintastic!!! second this monthly upating thing is just torturous....UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: delirious_fate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2007 16:04 PDT
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please LGV, may we have some more?
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Reviewed By: Sulawesi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 22:05 PDT
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Im checking back every 10-20 minutes to see if youve updated yet... no joke. Love it. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: guyan0/katie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 03:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Having just read the first part I'm really looking forward to this sequal! and so far so good, I have no idea where this is going but I can't wait to find out. I love the idea of Vegeta being owned by Bulma as well as him bristling from a defeat.
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Reviewed By: Katrina_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 08:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I didn't like the fact that you skipped 6 years in the plot, but by the end of the chapter I loved where you were going. I can't wait to see what Bulma does. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: keleosnoonna [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 04:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!! thank you for writing a sequel! I've been a fan of Unspoken for quite some time, and you can imagine my happyness when I found out the story was complete! Not only that but you're writing a sequel! I wonder if Bulma is gonna buy dear Veggie?? IH IH... I can't wait! You did a great job, like you always do!! keep it up!
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