| "Unbroken" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Title: Where'd you go???
Reviewed By: mutgaba [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2017 09:11 PST
Comment/Review:
LAV! It's been almost a decade since you published this story. Does
it not IRK you that you left so many of us hanging? Come on--you
know how much we love your work, so come back and bang this one
out. I know life happens and things get in the way, but just think
of the collective screams of joy that would ring across the world
from your fans if you posted another chapter. It'd be amazing. The
biggest comeback of the fanfiction world. You pretty much wrote the
book on B/V fics, so come back and remind everyone how it's done,
girl!
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Title: Brilliant!
Reviewed By: sugarcoated_ [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2015 05:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear LavenderGoddessV, having left another review on one of your
stories earlier today I ripped through Unbroken. Having
refamiliarised myself with your fics, I must say I think this is
one of -if not THE- best. Such raw emotion, and the pictures
painted to life by your words so beautifully. I can only hope you
come back one day to finish this story.
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Reviewed By: Eva21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2013 19:06 PDT
Comment/Review:
Loved your stories. It is a pleasure reading this one. I hope you can finish it. |
Reviewed By: Clau123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2013 02:55 PST
Comment/Review:
This is amazing!!! i love all your stories, so sad yo never finished this one |
Reviewed By: Eva21 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2012 01:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I really enjoyed reading them. I hope you will keep update, even after 5 years. |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2012 03:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you have done it again awesome story so touching and moving i cried...poor vegeta i hope bulma can save him......hopefully you have not giving up the story wanting to see how if all works out |
Reviewed By: Princess Buruma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2011 14:33 PDT
Comment/Review:
I thought this story was over, but then I realized you never wrote the "The End" words you use when ending a fic. If it is over, I want to say that I like the ending, despite it being quite tragic. It's not how the war ends, or whether Paragus ever finds Bulma that really matters here. This is a love story, about Bulma and Vegeta finally willingly being together, accepting each other even if they weren't planning on making it last forever. But since Vegeta will eventually die, apparently too soon to give Bulma the time to make a cure, then it all ends there. Nothing else matters even if some things are unconcluded. I specially loved chapter 3, it was so nice to read. |
Reviewed By: okieday17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 14:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories! I know its been forever since you've updated, but you can't leave the story hanging like this! I love all your other works, and I actually debated whether to read this and Unspoken since I knew there was no ending- but I got sucked into them, just as I did your other works. Please, please continue! |
Title: please finish
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2011 11:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I hope someday u will find the inspiration to finish it. I want to know what happens to vegeta. I've read all of ur fics. |
Reviewed By: Violet62 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2010 19:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE ! I CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER !!!! Please LGV, you can't leave it like this. I will be waiting for you !Love your fics so much !
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Reviewed By: Neafiir [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2010 14:51 PDT
Comment/Review:
No, no, no way! I began reading Unspoken and Unbroken thinking that the story was complete! I have always adored your work in all of your stories, and I sincerely hope you one day return to finish your work. Good luck, and I hope things are going well for you :)
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Reviewed By: Rae7654 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2010 12:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so good so far (as all of your other ones are) I really want to read what happens. I really really hope you finish this story!!
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Title: OH GAWD!
Reviewed By: frederickfox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2009 17:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh GAWD i loved the two stories... please try to pick it back up. I understand how this can be when you drop a story. Trust me, I've done it plenty of times but for the love of Allah try again. I enjoyed this story a lot.
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Title: freesprit
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2008 11:01 PST
Comment/Review:
It's so sad, that you've abandonded this story. You're an amazing writer, and i would definiatly read this story, if you would continue it. I love it.
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Reviewed By: Diamus [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 08:24 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so, so amazing. I really do love all of your fics and I look forward to reading more of this one soon!!
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