Title: Much enjoyed Reviewed By:kashumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 05:18 CDT Comment/Review: I like the story and where it is going. I love how the girl decides to stay with the vapire even in an imortal life. This is a really nice story ^ ^ Um...there is only one thing that i could think of that I would point out and it is that your spelling is quite a bit off, but that is something that a lot of people do. Perhaps maybe put some more detail? I'm not really sure but either way this is still a good story and I hope you post another chapter sometime soon in the future.
Reviewed By: vamoier lover On: May 29, 2007 16:15 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i rely like this story plz update pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz i love vampier story but there are not enough on this site can'twait tell you update