| "The emergency room" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: XxthreecheersforsweetrevengexX [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 12:44 CDT
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yes im reviewing my own poem. just to tell you guys that are into about this idea that came to me. i have posted a huge review on my immortal love poem that explains it but its kinda lost in another disscusion i was having about the poem meaning. Many people find different ways to connect to a poem. mainly from real life happenings. What i want some of you guys to do is kinda write a story about this same kinda experiance(did i spell that right, dont think so) if you can connect to this poem. My story is somewhat long and sad and i will post it if this thing works what the hell i will post it anyway so please if you have felt this kind of despair of have lost someone share your story it may actually help someone going through the same thing please email your storys to xxxthreecheersforsweetrevengexxx@yahoo.com and check out my review on immortal love it goes into a little more detail
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Title: helping
Reviewed By: katanna-uchiha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 15:03 CDT
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revenge you just go to the login area there should b where it says "forgot your password?" click on that and you'll have to type in your email address and they'll send you your password automaticly k?
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Reviewed By: katanna-uchiha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 15:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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it's a extraordinary poem i like it but im kenda afraid or scared and surprised at the fact(no offense) that it's reaaaaaaaaaaally long. it's great poem and im glad i met another emo friend yay
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Title: little long for me
Reviewed By: Diabolik Affinity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 12:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll start with saying that it did catch my interest and that I found it enjoyable to read. Only it was very long. Also you have a LOT of spelling errors. I can tell that this is similar to some MCR, and I don't take a liking to them. But it was still good and nicely descriptive and insightful into love and mortality, kinda. you just gotta work out the severe difference in stanzas. One will be really long, the rhyming one will be really short. I applaud your skills, though. Keep it up and you could be really good
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Title: This is amazing.
Reviewed By: otaku4life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 15:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amzing work. I wish I could write half as good as you. But alas, I'm a story writer. I'm no good at poems anymore, just little lines. Anyways, I can tell you're a fellow My Chemical Romance fan. They rock so hard, it's awesome. Anyways, in short: I love your poem! You should keep writing.
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Title: Aww!
Reviewed By: Shut_Down_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 21:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read both peoms, each equally sad in this way or that. The emergency room one seemed to go deeper than immortal, but you still get the jist (sp?) of it. I liked them both. As for mine, I'm actually much more of a song writer than poem, that one just kinda popped out one day! No I don't mind about using my name, it's really flattering. Thank you for reviewing. I look forward to your work, too ^_~
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 09:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww, that was sad. i like it. i like poems about death and such, it just holds an interest. its sooo sad, lifes so sad, and i guess they wanted to end it *cry*. and thanks for the review, it's much appreciated. Great job!!!
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Reviewed By: Raige [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 07:13 CDT
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The words in your poem cut deeply; they seem to draw on the quiet dispair and loneliness in the heart.
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