| "In the Shadow of Destiny" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2008 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey, sorry i didn't review before. i meant to, i just wasn't able to. don't ask why, i don't know myself. so i just wanted to say i like this story. oh, and when i first read about Caleb i was wondering if you got him from WITCH. cause both Calebs are a lot alike except for your Caleb is older. anyways, love your story. keep up the good work. and update soon.
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 15:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
A.K.A. your first reviewer.
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2007 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No it wasnt depressing.The end of the chapter was happy.except the cliff hanger.cant wait for the next one.please update soon.luck.bye.
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
so depressing.awell.i hope it has a happy ending. miley A.K.A. your first reviewer
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Reviewed By: future author On: May 23, 2007 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy reading your story. i can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the new chapter.although it was very sad.how could she betray kagome her own daughter,flesh and blood and all.now kagomes 23 years old,right?will inuyasha be in the next chapter?cuase i hope he will.and when will they get together?anyways update soon.luck. miley A.K.A. your first reviewer
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Title: miley
Reviewed By: miley [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.i liked it.it was geat.except the sad ending.awell.theyre bound to meet again.update soon.luck.bye. miley A.K.A. your first reviewer
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