| "One Hanyou Pirate, One Noble Hanyou" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Umm................
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 19:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really want to read this but it says it starts at chapter 2. What do I do?
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Title: Suggestions
Reviewed By: Sailor Draca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Right, this is not a flame. 1) Write a story plan out. 2) please check your spelling, it is awful. 3) Have you heard of paragraphs? You could try doing that and starting a new line when a new person begins to speak. 4) Get a BETA, they help..... a lot. Try to keep the characters original. Keep their personalities at the beginning and have them develop as the story does. Just some advice. Love *Draca*
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Title: well done
Reviewed By: rukiia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2007 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, What can I say ?! I dont know. uhm, yeah this story is very good, I really good.. :D Nice working..
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay u updated!!!!! nice chap by the way! well UPDATE A.S.A.P PLEASE!!! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!! U ROCK!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chap was good. I liked it. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! YOU'R THE GREATEST!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimePrincessInuLover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally enjoyed reading you'r story it ROCKED! anyway can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOOOON!!
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Reviewed By: Candy_luv05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great plz update!
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Reviewed By: Raccoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2007 08:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Unfortunately I don't like Misty, May and romance either. ( I hate romance, that's why I only gave 5 to the enjoyment factor. Sorry. )But I gotta admit, this story is something that should be kept up as long as you keep on writing interesting turns into it. And y'know, there's a movie called Pirates of the Carribean ( ? ) which my dad always talks about ... don't make this story turn into a POTC fanfic, okay ? After all, better spelled than 50 % of the stories.
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Title: keep it going
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2007 20:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep it flowin! i'm liking so keep it going!
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Title: keep on going
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep on going....................................................................NO W!!! j/k ^^
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Title: I like it
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2007 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, but i think you should make the chapters longer. just saying. it was good. cant wait for you to continue!
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Reviewed By: EmilyBlood [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2007 11:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Thanks for reviewing my story again. Its so funny you have Kagome as a hanyou-I've got a whole story plotted out about that, which I've been waiting to write. But not with pirates! Good idea. Other than adding a little more description, I like where your story is going. Sometimes you just have to keep writing even when people aren't reviewing. Sooner or later people will catch on.
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Title: Like it
Reviewed By: kagome4ever77 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 12:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it, make the chapters longer but it sounds good. Also thanks 4 reviewing my story!
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