| "Weather and Haul Wind" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: rena555
Reviewed By: rena555 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2008 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked your story and i would be interested in reading a sequel. that is if you choose to write a sequel.
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 02:40 CST
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mm your story's really interesting, although i'd probably have to disagree about duo's not being observant (i'd say thieves pretty much have to be observant or they'd be pretty bad at their profession). lol. anywayy, i hope you update soon. i'd like to see what happens in the hermit's home.
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Reviewed By: Syngi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this story. The characters are well defined and I'm not bothered by the fact that there is no love interest. The plot keeps me glued to the page and that's really what counts. I can't wait to read more. Thank you very much for such a fascinating group of characters.
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Reviewed By: Firyn [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2007 21:57 CDT
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Wow... I'm really liking this story. please update it soon!!!! You're doing a really good job with it.
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Reviewed By: paia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 16:51 CDT
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I just thought I'd mention that more people would read your story if you bothered to spell-check your summary. Bad spelling turns off readers. Happy writing
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Reviewed By: Fluffy of the SKT [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2007 13:06 CDT
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I'm quite suprised that you have not gotten that many reviews, this is a wonderful and captivating story. First of all, I have to say that Quatre is absolutely adorable! I was sort of...to my shame...cooing at some parts. So cute...anyway...About this summary, I'll attempt it and message you with the often-times sad results. Wish me luck?
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Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 08:26 CDT
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I am definitely enjoying this story. Though I am a yaoi fangirl at heart, sometimes a nice normal story where everyone isn't jumping each other all the time is nice too. I'm curious to see where they are going and what sort of trouble they will all get into, and also what role Trowa will play in their crew. Thanks for writing! I'll keep reading! ~sylenc
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Reviewed By: silxcite [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 16:06 CDT
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i enjoyed how heero is atypical from the role of a uke in this story. ^^ i also liked how u took your time in developing the plot rather than jumping right into the action ;)
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