| "The Vampires Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: vampier lover On: May 29, 2007 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story plz update sooooooooooooooon i love the way pple talk about vamiers and stuf hint the nick nam =P
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Title: Ahh...
Reviewed By: Solarity the Hedgehog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2007 14:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm...interesting stil, I smell blood and vamps. (no crud what was my first clue!) Anyway, if it's how a girl lives out a vampire life, describe that but don't give it all away. Just take the main point of the story and add a few details to it. You might have a desription!
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Title: 44455
Reviewed By: Solarity the Hedgehog [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't say much, you need to add more to the story.
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