| "Ebony and Ivory" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: Another review
Reviewed By: Vert_Fey On: June 03, 2007 14:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh I love it when a story picks up speed. Brilliant. This last chapter was amazing. Kyo's point of veiw is so ...Kyo *snort It was funny too. The meeting of Kyo an Yuki for the first time was absolutely awkard and I died laughing. And the last chapter when they were yelling at each other was perfect. I was a bit worried you were going to be too sentimental (Tohru's vision of the two of them at the lake SCARY). The last two chapters put those to rest. They may understand each other but not after a long hard road YIPPEE for character development.
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: June 02, 2007 21:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
Those last two chapters were great! It's so nice to see Yuki and Kyo actually being nice to each other. Thanks for updating so quickly!
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: May 31, 2007 06:58 EDT
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Wow, this story is so beautifully written. I love it. I hope there is more to come soon
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: dawnmm On: May 30, 2007 23:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am highly enjoying this - especially how fast you update this is good some chapters could be more but you leave me hanging--great
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Title: Good Start
Reviewed By: Vert Fey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 00:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far so good. Starts out a bit slow,not much necessarily to catch the readers eye, but seems to be picking up speed. (might put in a more hooking chapter in the beginning since some people are not as fascinated by piano playing as I am) However, the writing is beautiful, and Yuki is described and acts accurately.( It is also very nice to see an OC who isn't a zodiac member from America ;) ) Good Luck look forward to seeing the rest...
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