| "Ebony and Ivory" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: dude1234567890 On: April 26, 2012 07:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWESOME!! |
Reviewed By: Phoebe On: April 06, 2012 00:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is seriously one of the best fanfics I have EVER read. Even if it is long, and has a couple of plot changes, It Is Awesome.(Seriously) If I could give it a 536 on that 1-10 thing above, I would. It is really really really really really really really really really really (you get the idea) good. I have been reading it for the past 7 hours, and finally finished. Seriously, if you aren't already one, I suggest you become an author. I LOVE IT!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Victory On: April 23, 2008 01:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I know this is from last year, but I promised myself I wouldn't review till the end, and it took me a quite a while to get there. It was great! It's funny, and insightful, if a bit wordy at times (but then, I'm a bad rambler), and you have a way of showing everyone's perspective even when it's not their POV. Very creative storyline. I never would've come up with it. (I have lots of stories in my head.) Maybe a few small spelling/grammar mistakes, but I don't really remember. Write more! Do you have any stories for any other series? (More FB is good. I'm just curious, cuz I like a lot of different things.) Oh, and I've played piano for years, so I recognized what the title meant right away. In fact, I think that's why I started reading it in the first place. Have fun writing! You have a gift! (What's with my exclamation points?) :)
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Title: Response to "the bastard child": This Story is CLEAN
Reviewed By: dragongirl7978 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 20:23 EST
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Yuki and Kyo are not supposed to be gay in my story. It was my intention to write a clean, non-yaoi, non-shonen-ai fanfic about those two. It said so in the description. One of my main reasons was that I was trying very hard to keep them as close to the canon as possible while still making them become friends. And in the canon, Kyo ends up with Tohru (which I tried to hint at), and Yuki ends up with Machi. I said several times throughout the story that their relationship was not supposed to be in any way sexual. Random jokes from Shigure and Ayame are in no way meant to be taken seriously. Another reason was that I personally think the idea of those two kissing is just wrong. o_O But thank you for your review! I was worried I wouldn't get any more. Maybe I should go through and edit it a little to make myself clearer.
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Title: chapter 48
Reviewed By: the bastard child On: November 15, 2007 17:10 EST
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ok, so i was going to just wait until the end to write a review, and i came so damn close but i have to write something really quick. the bedroom scene, i just keep waiting to read that yuki kisses kyou. and i'm fine with that, mostly, but i'm guessing that wasn't your intention. or was it? hmm. anyway, oh my god! i love it! i'll tell you how much so when i reach the end, otherwise i'll just seem redundant.
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Reviewed By: Pandora-sama On: October 12, 2007 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's over!!! Ç_________Ç
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Title: good
Reviewed By: dawnmm On: September 19, 2007 14:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've really enjoyed this series you are doing so much with it and explaining alot. I read it mostly at work and am unable to leave reviews their so wanted to give you to big thumbs up for your story thanks for sharing
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Reviewed By: dawn m [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
no fair cliffy dont hate you but update soon
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Reviewed By: Pandora-sama On: July 29, 2007 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Huhuhuhuhuh Great as ever... *___* Yun-chan, what are you doing? Ó__Ò Kyo-kun, help him... o/ Kisses!^^
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Reviewed By: Pandora-sama On: July 23, 2007 20:25 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!! *______* Yun-kun, plz, get better!! /o/
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Reviewed By: Pandora-sama On: July 18, 2007 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic... really! I'm reading and I'm loving! It's different, it's kind, has drama, angst... perfect. Very very nice. Congratulations!^^ Kissu.
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Title: Of Chapter 17 & 18
Reviewed By: Vert Fey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 00:09 EDT
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(Yes I know its my third commentary but why not?) First on chapter 17 then ending to this climaxed brilliantly. Especially since Yuki didn't just immiediatly welcome him with open arms. Anyone who's been in a relationship knows it does not work that way (even if many fanfics might lead you to believe so *rolls eyes). As for Chapter 18 Arigato gosaimasu Authoress-sama!(Thank you for putting up with my whining and posting this for your loyal readers...yes readers the early posting is my doing WOOT for pestering...)
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Reviewed By: sanur On: June 11, 2007 01:16 EDT
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Thanks for sharing the story, I really like it when you make their friendship progress more real. Those boys have *issues* to sort out with, either their own or with each other.
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: June 08, 2007 06:10 EDT
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Wow, Kyo is really confused now. You come up with these chapters quickly, don't you? Well, thank you for updating.
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Reviewed By: sakura-bell On: June 06, 2007 08:15 EDT
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You update fast. Ah XD I love it how Yuki and Kyo always have their little spats and how Kyo gets so confused then annoy, then scared and then goes back to being confused. XD I would have never though of Kyo whinning like Moiji. Thanks for updating so quickly!
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