| "Looking for the Perfect Nanny" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: mae_may On: November 21, 2010 16:36 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I realized that I just read your amazing fan fic about 2 years later... and honestly your story just stuck on me from the first word! I hope you will have the chance to complete this story because I am anticipating how these events and relationships will turn out--> You have a brilliant & creative imagination which is portrayed through your stories too! |
Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2008 19:28 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is brill and i can't believe i forgot about it, i will being diving over to fanfiction to read the rest for def.
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Reviewed By: Butterfly kiss [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2008 03:50 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hope you upload a new chapter soon. Can't wait to find out ow Haruhi reacts. It's really good! Keep writing.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 17:20 EST
Comment/Review:
this is such a good story! so how did kyouya get a son when he liked haruhi? what happens next? please update soon.
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Reviewed By: LadyS On: November 25, 2007 23:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good.Please continue. You do need to work on editing and grammar though, but otherwise I liked how you didn't make Kyoya seeem out of character when being nice. Please update soon :)
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: SolitaryCheshire [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 19:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your style of writing is amazing and I enjoyed the storyline immensely. I love Kyouya/Haruhi pairings and you have captured the characters and attraction perfectly. Consider me an avid fanbitch and please be so kind as to read mine.
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Reviewed By: Siras On: October 21, 2007 08:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Story is very interesting and I really whant to know what happened to Kyouya. You created very good story line but there was few typing errors that started to be annoying but I hope you will be able to finish this =)
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Reviewed By: cody7799 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 16:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the first bit, but it didn't keep me interested. Plus, the constant mis-spelling of se"n"pai and Kyoya is agitating. Other than that, good job.
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Reviewed By: DC On: August 15, 2007 22:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome so far, can't wait for the next chapter. =)
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Reviewed By: Miss Mischief [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 06:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the first two chapters sound really promising, i look forward to more and also finding out who is the mother of Kyouya's son too.
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