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| "Full Metal Panic! Essay Assignment" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: starzki
Reviewed By: starzki [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2009 23:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you had a wonderful grasp of the main characters' characterizations. The voice you wrote for each of them was very, very good. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this story! Thanks for posting it.
| Reviewed By: airen0920 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That, was so awesome! i Liked it very much. i Like the opening, the taLk with the teacher, the graduation, the teasing, everything! i didn't Lose sight of the Souske and Kaname i Love! UnLike other fanfics who sLightLy distort the main characters' features just to drag it in the hentai category. i Love the romantic sex scene. Their actions spoke so many Languages that reaLLy seem to come from an ideaListic Love that i wanted. it's Like, it's not about sex aLL the time, you know? The sex scene is SOOO romantic! i wish my first time was Like that! ALthough i know you couLd write something more 'ecchi', but i'm gLad you sticked to the way you wrote it! ALthough i must point out that if not most, then some of the parts of your work contained grammaticaL and speLLing errors. But, i'm sure even YOU are aware of that. ThankfuLLy, despite those errors, i couLd stiLL if not fuLLy, then sLightLy understand your work. Either way, TWO THUMBS UP! i LOVED your work!
| Reviewed By: pagan_sedjou(the site logged me off!) On: July 01, 2007 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Applause applause applause applause applause! This was a very intriguing, very good, very... steamy in that last chapter... fic. There were few grammatical errors. Your writing style is wonderful. Your characterization was on point. I loved the graduation part. That was funny! I really enjoyed the fic and am so putting it on my favorites list!
| Reviewed By: chidori22otauku On: May 31, 2007 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story! i loved it...good work....it would be cooler if u had a little more lemon in it! im just saying....if u need help with that, go read a story called "christmas love for inuyasha" it is a lemon story i did...good job on story!!!
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