| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rena Tsukino [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2010 22:00 EDT
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Love this!!! Keep updating!!! I want to know how this ends!! Good Work!
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Title: THIS IS A MUST FOR ALL B/V FANS
Reviewed By: VEGETA 'S LOVER On: April 13, 2010 15:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS IS SO O O O GOOD!!! PLEASE PLEASE GIVE US MORE, JUST DO NOT TAKE SO LONG! WE LOVE YOU!
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_the_Sayains [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2010 16:29 EDT
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Holy spam in my email! Guess since its all been revised I'm going to have to reread it lol. I'll get started on that this evening then ^_^
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Reviewed By: sdfs On: April 04, 2010 17:43 EDT
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read this years ago and just finished re-reading, very excited about new chapters!
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Reviewed By: Vegeta's Blue-Haired Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2010 08:40 EDT
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This is a great story! I can't wait for more revised chapters!
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Reviewed By: nutnatz [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2009 08:23 EDT
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I am very intrigued by what you have going on here and I would be very disapointed if you indeed never finished it. I loved the twist of the transport to the alternate dimention. It's a twist I had yet to see in all my years reading B/V. I hope I get to read the end
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2008 10:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I'm glad you're back; I've been missing this story.
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Reviewed By: ADancingGoddess On: August 14, 2008 02:15 EDT
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So I just stumbled upon this story today...and finished it in a matter of 3 hours I was that enthralled (let me tell you, my eyes are a little sore from staring at the computer screen for so long). I do hope you update quickly, as waiting an entire month would be cruel and unusual punishment...absolutely wonderful! Finally an A/U that has originality! And is well written, AND has a great plot line AND...well, you get the picture UPDATE PLEASE, :o)
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Reviewed By: alsnd12 On: May 13, 2008 06:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I love it! Please keep writing and don't leave us hanging? :)
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Reviewed By: Fran_kit On: May 04, 2008 04:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good take on the BV relationship, the setting/storyline is addictive and inspired. Keep writing
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Title: Chapter 39
Reviewed By: theblueone [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2008 12:33 EDT
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I'm not sure if there was a problem temporarily with MediaMiner or what, but chapter 39 seems to be working just fine now. If not, this story is also posted on fanfiction.net. Hope it works for you this time! Abbi (theblueone)
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2008 18:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, there seems to be some kind of glitch with capter 39. It's not showing up at all. Just thought I'd let you know. Your fic is wonderful!!! Can't wait to read ch. 39!
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Title: Chapter 40
Reviewed By: DarkSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2008 23:03 EDT
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Yay an update! So now Vegeta's going to make a plan to rescue his lovely family, but of course, it's not going to be easy right? hehe can't wait to see what happens next. 'Rash'kin a sonat su ma. Skar shinta mun a kin'moshan... something's going to happen, and it'll definitely be interesting. Another great chapter!
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: DarkSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 14:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I spent the last night reading all over your story, and I must say that I'm in love with it. I'm so glad that you're updating this story. It's unbelievable how good you are. And chapter 39 was really good, it's so beautifully written. I can't wait to see what happens next, the suspense is killing me haha! Don't stop doing what you do, you're making people like me dream. Thank you!
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Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 20:53 EST
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Another great chapter. I just wish they had found out by now who is the traitor is. I can't wait to read more of this great story.
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