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Title: wow
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 12:31 EDT
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I've just spent two days reading your story, wow i love it. i even love the fact that there are no lemons in it( and i love lemons) please don't wait to long to update.
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Reviewed By: darkprince32 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what he's sayin', but this fic is awsome and i hope you continue to write
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2005 02:29 EDT
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Hey this is a great read... I've read it before and just came accross it again... you did an awesome job with it... I can't wait to see what else you may have in the future for it... ^_~ of course if you have time... life has this way of getting in the middle of things
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Reviewed By: Trisha [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2005 01:04 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i remember reading this fic like 2 years ago and i thought chapter 20 was the last chapter but then i decided to read it again cuz it was so good and i guess i was wrong. i really thought that was the end, i think a lot of people did. anyway its really good. i wonder what the hell is going on tho haha. how did bulma get there and i wonder where vegeta is, is he going through the same thing? is he gonna show up? i thought Prince vegeta would be mated to a saiyan female when u mentioned that mark on his back. and what would happen to prince vegeta (the one in vegeta-sei) if bulma leaves. i mean bulma is dead in that dimension right, all eathlings were right? so he'd be all alone then, aww thats sad. man its getting even better pls update when u got the time.
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Title: how dare you
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: April 07, 2005 12:23 EDT
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you evil hooker, i would have rather had a cliff hanger, but know you had to end it at a good spot............why am i complaining again? good chappy hoorah
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Random Reviewer On: April 03, 2005 21:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An awesome fic I absolutely loved it and I hope you update soon!
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Title: Chapter 31
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 08:52 EST
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I liked this chapter, it seems that if Bulma and Vegeta are in some kind of bond dream on earth that its to test whether Vegeta would except Bulma, REALLY except her as his mate. For right before they got launched into this reality Vegeta was subconsciously rejecting the bond, the fact that on Vegteasei he chose Bulma and protected her may mean that they can return to the reality on Earth....or does it...i'm still confused about that haunting mantra though: 'Rash'kin a sonat su ma. Skar shinta mun a kin'moshan… Rash'kin a sonat su ma. Skar shinta mun a kin'moshan…' What could it mean, their at war with a planet called Sonat su sei and in this chapter Vegerta mentioned the above line dircetly after talking about the destruction of Earth. Was Earth one of their associate worlds, and did the saiyans have to destroy it under the orders of Frieza? Why would vegeta repeat that chant in his meditation as well?
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Title: VenusLegacy
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2005 08:30 EST
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well one thing i like about alternate universe fics is the originality and the fact that you don't know what to expect. That was some twist you gave to the story i'm still trying to figure out what happened. Is Bulma appearing on Vegetasei a part of the bonding process, which would mean that both vegeta and bulma are both asleep on Earth. And what is the significance of Sonat-sei and the fact that Vegetasei is at the brink of war with them? I'm beginning to think it is a part of the bonding process, since vegeta uttered sonat in his meditative mantra when they were back on Earth. And why is their marking black? Black seems like a sign for something bad, like an ominous warning but what could have gone wrong to cause that mark?
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Title: Chapter 31
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 20:11 EST
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*Twitch*...Nappa.... I AM GOING TO FREAKING KILL YOU IF I EVER GET MY HAND ON YOU!!!!!! May you rest in... pieces, King Vegeta! Hey... there that phase again.... Interesting. Hm...
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Title: YES
Reviewed By: harmony23 On: April 01, 2005 17:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chappie.....great writing......i can't wait to read the next one.....update when you can
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Reviewed By: Vegetaslindalou On: March 31, 2005 14:30 EST
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I am so glad you updated. I kept coming back to see if you did. Thanks. now only one little thing... I read it all, could you please update again??? :)
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Title: VenusLegacy
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 14:13 EST
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well one thing i like about alternate universe fics is the originality and the fact that you don't know what to expect. That was some twist you gave to the story i'm still trying to figure out what happened. Is Bulma appearing on Vegetasei a part of the bonding process, which would mean that both vegeta and bulma are both asleep on Earth. And what is the significance of Sonat-sei and the fact that Vegetasei is at the brink of war with them? I'm beginning to think it is a part of the bonding process, since vegeta uttered sonat in his meditative mantra when they were back on Earth. And why is their marking black? Black seems like a sign for something bad, like an ominous warning but what could have gone wrong to cause that mark?
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Title: VenusLegacy
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 14:05 EST
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Chap 8 i'm undecided about the way you've depicted the bond between Bulma and Vegeta for it seems a bit ramdom as if anyone could have walked into Vegeta's room, touched his energy, and become bonded to him. I wonder what would have happened if Dr Briefs or Mrs Briefs did the same thing. It just seems a bit quick that i find myself agreeing with Vegeta when he says: "Vegeta grunted. He didn't like where this was going. They may have been bonded, but a part of him knew that all that was happening was most likely a direct result of the attracting energies between them. If something ever did happen, he wanted it to be out of free will. Not because their bodies, at the moment, were chemically drawn to one another" Has Vegeta also accepted Bulmas energy or is it just Bulma who recieved Vegeta's?
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Title: VenusLegacy
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 12:54 EST
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Chap 8 i'm undecided about the way you've depicted the bond between Bulma and Vegeta for it seems a bit ramdom as if anyone could have walked into Vegeta's room, touched his energy, and become bonded to him. I wonder what would have happened if Dr Briefs or Mrs Briefs did the same thing. It just seems a bit quick that i find myself agreeing with Vegeta when he says: "Vegeta grunted. He didn't like where this was going. They may have been bonded, but a part of him knew that all that was happening was most likely a direct result of the attracting energies between them. If something ever did happen, he wanted it to be out of free will. Not because their bodies, at the moment, were chemically drawn to one another" Has Vegeta also accepted Bulmas energy or is it just Bulma who recieved Vegeta's?
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Title: up to chap 5
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2005 12:30 EST
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I don't think i will ever tire of a Bulma and Vegeta fic this one is particularly interesting as its an alternate universe. You have built up the similarities in their personalities very well; for instance the almost obsessive workaholic tendencies evident in Vegeta are also prevalent in Bulma. I found it funny the way Vegeta would try to get a rise out of Bulma by leaving muddy tracks in her kitchen or blowing up the house bots. He almost seems like a little child desperately wanting attention, accept he uses extreme measures. I felt that the following sentence poignantly summed up Vegeta's frustration at Goku being a super saiyan: "The power Kakkarot wields yet does not understand" And the last scene in chapter 5 was absolutely beautiful the way you portray Vegeta meditating over the balcony, uttering his dead saiyan language, with the blue light surrounding him creates an intimate setting especially when Bulma enters his room.
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