| "The Price You Pay" Reviews/Comments [ 187 ] |
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Title: Chapter 30
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 18:11 EST
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*Twitch* Must...not...kill...Nappa....*Twitch* MUST NOT STAB HIM IN THE EYE WITH A SHARP DAGGER!! GR! Hm... I wonder what will happen in the meeting of Father and Son... Well, It will be interesting. Keep up the good work!
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Title: Chapter 29
Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2005 17:31 EST
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Hm... So Zarbon know she is Vegeta's mate... and he know what happen to the 'Prophecy' in that dimension. Great... Freiza know... well, somewhat... *Read the dream* Hm... Interesting. Komachi Ayako: ...I agree with Zarbon.
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Reviewed By: Veglma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 21:40 EST
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Zarbon!? HE IS ON THE SAIYAN SIDE!?!?! Earth.... May thee rest in peace! And what has begun? The Prophecy?
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Title: woohoo!
Reviewed By: blue dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 17:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah! I was searching for new fics to read, and my eyes fell on this one. I'm hooked!!!! Can't wait to see if Bulma can make Vegeta remember..... Update please??? ^__^ Great story!!!!!
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Title: Review Response
Reviewed By: Abbi (theblueone) On: March 06, 2005 21:42 EST
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I'm sorry about that. I know that I haven't even had any time to update in the past few months so it doesn't even really apply anymore. Thank you for your honesty. I'll try not to put that in any more of the chapters. :-) Abbi (theblueone)
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Reviewed By: jenbater On: March 06, 2005 19:02 EST
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You know, I really do like this fic, but this: "Please try to remember: YOU + REVIEW = UPDATE. I need feedback people!" doesn't really make me want to review.
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Reviewed By: animesexbabe On: January 10, 2005 22:55 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i want more very soon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz....... pleessssssssssssssssssssssss pleezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz......
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Title: Bwahahahaha
Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 23:24 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil story, I love it! I just wish that I had a freaking clue what was going on! Lol. Anyhow...just wondering why you haven't updated in a couple months. you mentioned school...but with how short your chapters are, surely it doesn't take that long to write it! It would take me like two hours at the max to write them, lol. Oh, and I also noticed that you like, took an almost 2 year break from this story. Either you had SEVERE writer's block or something, lol. Anyway, please please please please please please updated SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON because I really enjoy this story, and I really need to know what happens! I have no clue where you are going with this!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! Sincerely, Gohan's Onna PS: Check out my stories!
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Reviewed By: Veglma On: October 24, 2004 23:31 EDT
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Are Vegeta and Bulma go though the spiritual part of the bond or is it as butterflyV says a side-effect of them be different races? Why did the third candle glow the brightly after the other ones burned out? What the He-HFIL does Rash'kin a sonat su ma. Skar shinta mun a kin'moshan Rash'kin a sonat su ma. Skar shinta mun a kin'moshan mean? And who in the heck is Sonat su-sei? Good luck in get over 100 pages! Time for me to wait for more chapters.
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Reviewed By: :) On: October 20, 2004 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! this is one hell of a story! i love it!! i cant wait until your next chapter comes out!!!!
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Reviewed By: vegetaslindalou On: October 12, 2004 08:43 EDT
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US+REVIEW=UPDATE. It is still great, and i can't wate for you to update again so i am giving another big thumbs up on this fic. so please.... update soon again. ^.^
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Title: thr price you pay
Reviewed By: ccfleursdelys [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 08:54 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
such a great fic keep the good work
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Reviewed By: vegetasLindalou On: October 09, 2004 13:49 EDT
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It is sooooo Good. Please update soon!!!! Keep up the great job. I love your work!
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Reviewed By: Dark Rain On: September 26, 2004 11:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, it's been a very long time since a fic has held my attention so raptly like this as yours has! You've done an excellent job capturing their personalities! I am so looking forward to the next update! Don't keep everyone waiting too long!!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: September 26, 2004 05:19 EDT
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This is really getting interesting now!!! I'm guessing that Vegeta's memory loss from the ritual could be from the fact that they're from different races and the was bound to be some kind of side-effect. Then again...that's probably too obvious!! LOL.
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