Reviewed By: linesy On: June 05, 2007 05:22 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Great beginning! I like the flow.
Reviewed By: LadyAmazon14 On: June 03, 2007 16:34 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: It was a very interesting story and i enjoyed it. but hey i'm a girl and like some girls who love kai i want to know if there's going to be any small romance. i know there probably isn't any but i just want a little romance or if there's going to be a girl besides hilary.
