| "The Inu no Taisho and the Miko" Reviews/Comments [ 32 ] |
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Reviewed By: very nice On: September 12, 2008 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fic. I don't really like how fast Kagome fel in love wth Segumi, infatuation would be better, but thats just me. I love, (wait thats not pronounced enough...) LOVE!!!!.. (yes thats better), your story. don't give up on it. after about three months I had to go searching for it. its been a really long time. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: vampirebride kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 15:04 CST
Comment/Review:
i like it i like the idea. so keep going with it.
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Reviewed By: nice job! On: November 21, 2007 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story! i cant wait for next chappie! but just a little constructive criticism... not all of your sentences flow together well. have some one read them and help you out a little. but with practice you'll get better. you really have some talent, being a published aouthor I know these things. so keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 13:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh yeah Please put some lemons in here PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2007 13:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! I never would have thought to make sessy and inuyasha's dad fall in love with kagome! Its a very interesting couple Please Please Please update!!!!! *gets on hands and knees*
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Reviewed By: not like the movies [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very original! It seems your writing style progressed as you got further into the story, so good for you XP I love it so far! The idea of Inu and Sesshy's dad being Kagome's destined mate makes me squeal with fangirlish joy!! Please update again soon~! Oh, and I vote lemons everywhere XD
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Title: buh
Reviewed By: noonen On: August 31, 2007 05:44 CDT
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the story is quite good, has a plot etc. but... you make inuyasha sound like damn fool. And a very irritating one too! ^.^' i'm speechless
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Reviewed By: EtherealSiren On: August 29, 2007 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This really is a lot more interesting than I thought it might be. I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: n8tivegurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 09:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yay an update. hmm very interesting i wonder what inuyasha is thinking right now? so when can i expect another update? just curious. later until then.
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Reviewed By: KatKall On: August 08, 2007 07:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!
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Reviewed By: lady silverfox a.k.a. mychelle 79 On: July 23, 2007 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update and please give inutaisho a human form i mean how can she mate with him in a dog form? i guess it would be beastiallity if she mated with him in dog form!!!!! will there be lemons in this story?
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Reviewed By: lovin' it On: July 20, 2007 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep on writing!!!!!! oh and in chappie 2 you speelt really 'realy'.. just telling yah!!!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 20:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: dark_angel_of_death9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 19:57 CDT
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nice!!! very cool plz keep writing!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2007 19:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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lemons on both mediaminer and ff.net!!!! loved it up date soon!!! ja ne!
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