| "Blue Sand" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Blue Sand
Reviewed By: MewHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2009 11:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story's good. don't let people boss you around, just keep going with the story and let your imagination do the talking. your a good autho and deserve to be told so. :)
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Reviewed By: o0kittyblue0o [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2009 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not trying to be mean but this would be so much better if you didn't try taking short cuts like "blah blah" Kag. instead try "Blah blah." Said Kagome as she looked around. Or something of the sort. You're not giving a good scene nor giving readers a chance to see what you are. I DO like the plot, extremely so, even if I've only read this very little you've posted. Again, like the first scene with Kagome as a child, you could have drawn that out with what she was doing, thinking, where she was, what she saw before the sand raccoon. Details make a story all the better, and you've got the imagination to do it!! I do not mean to be rude with any of this, I'm only trying to help you become a better writer, so please don't think I'm trying to like attack you or anything...
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Title: screw them
Reviewed By: Rauko_Arisha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah, you simplify alot but who cares i and others like the story so tell those that don't to take a log walk off a short cliff and leave the rest to happily read in peace. and i can sympathise, freshman year of collage is hectic. don't worry it gets easier. please update
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Group Of Story Fans* MORE MORE GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS TO READ!!!!! All you need is to make it longer and try different style on writing your stories! I'm not saying it suck but it's all ways good to try new things but I so love your story!!! Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Jessica Cowley [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Group Of Story Fans* MORE MORE GIVE US MORE CHAPTERS TO READ!!!!!
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Reviewed By: i wear black deal with it [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2007 12:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think ur story rocks... about the people who flamed u, well they can go 2 hell. as long as u like what ur doing other people dont matter. update soon! pleeeeease
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Reviewed By: the forgotten angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 20:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I think you have a great idea and if you just have patience and some help it could be totally awesome! so plz write more and try not to pay attention to people who think they know everything. Also if college takes up most of your time then you can ask someone on mediaminer to help you by telling them your idea and asking them to write some chapters or review your chapters and add some of their own ideas. I would love to read this story. :) blue
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Reviewed By: kaira2828 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 19:29 CST
Comment/Review:
i love the story so far plezz continue!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2007 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
quite interesting... what with the pairings and the story... hope you find time to update... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: i wear black deal with it [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 14:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it i think the prophecy is seirously bitch'n. update soon
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon, i can't wait to see what happens!!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 01:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Heehee! Cool! I liked it! I hope you'll be able to write some more soon!
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2007 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH!!!! another enthraling story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOK so far your first chapter that I gues wasn`t a chapter called Prophesy well it kinda confused the hell out of me and with the actual chapter 1 was really short oh well oh yeah could you spell Kagome and Sango`s name out in my opinion that sounds better than making it short like seeing San instead of Sango and Kag instead of Kagome there names spelled out in full is better anyways I think I will like this story because of that ass Sasuke isn`t paired up with either Kagome or Sango but Gaara he sucks well atleast Naruto go Sango I guess that makes up for the pairrings oh well please update son and please don`t let the story hang like almost all the other authors do meanning start a story but never finish it oh yeah and can yo please make the chapters alittle bit longer
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Reviewed By: starblade2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2007 20:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Delo Brown!!! Girl, let me be your beta!!! LOL I'm betaing for three other ppl, so let me do yourssssss. ^_^ Get back to me on MySpace.
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