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| "Heal my wounds" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Theru-chan On: August 11, 2007 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, very good! Lol, Yaten suprised Minako in the bathroom xD I agrre with Imari, it would be great, if there would be some hot Hentai-moments
| Reviewed By: Imari On: August 04, 2007 09:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it, please update as soon as you can. And I hope Yaten gets together with Minako and dunno maybe have some hot, passionate hentai moments together...?
| Reviewed By: Naruto88 On: June 19, 2007 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, that was so great, when Yaten suprised Minako in the bathroom. the first chapter was so sad but the second was funny. Love your writing. Minako and Yaten forever!!!!!
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