| "Final Touch" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Tenshi of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 20:13 CDT
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Wow! That was evil. Evil but good. I'm not partial to Yami/Yugi torture, but this wasn't bad. Actually, I think when Yami Bakura was in the puzzle, he was looking for the room that held the Pharoah's ancient memories...or something like that anyways. Still...I hope you continue it and I hope that Yami and Yugi get a happy ending. I'm such a sap I know -_-' , But I like happy endings ^_^ So keep up the good work. Hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2004 10:21 CST
Comment/Review:
It's a nice story. please update soon
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Reviewed By: L.H On: March 24, 2004 17:42 CST
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wow! how cool was that?! i'll tel you, it was really cool. I like your story. it's awesome, man! or woman! uhhhhh...oh yeah, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Sharon MacKinnon On: November 17, 2003 19:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yugi:*faints* Me:Yugi! That was just great!^^0 Even though Yugi just fainted. Yugi:groan. Me:*sigh**sigh*Oh well...Forgive me Yugi and Yami on what I am about to besto upon Yugi... Yugi:groan. Me:*sigh**sigh**dumps a bucket filled with water and ice cubes in it* Yugi:Ahhhhhhhhh!*screams like a girl no offense* Yami:Now look what you've kone to my aibou!!!! Me:*sigh**nervously laughs**sweatdrops*^^0 Yugi:Yami I told you that she didn't mean to! Yami:*sigh**sweatdrops* Yugi,Yami and Me:Keep going! Yami:><
Yugi:^^0 Me:Anyway,tata for now!*no offense Panda Girl^^0*
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Reviewed By: Sharon MacKinnon On: November 17, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yugi:*faints* Me:Yugi! That was just great!^^0 Even though Yugi just fainted. Yugi:groan. Me:*sigh**sigh*Oh well...Forgive me Yugi and Yami on what I am about to besto upon Yugi... Yugi:groan. Me:*sigh**sigh**dumps a bucket filled with water and ice cubes in it* Yugi:Ahhhhhhhhh!*screams like a girl no offense* Yami:Now look what you've kone to my aibou!!!! Me:*sigh**nervously laughs**sweatdrops*^^0 Yugi:Yami I told you that she didn't mean to! Yami:*sigh**sweatdrops* Yugi,Yami and Me:Keep going! Yami:><
Yugi:^^0 Me:Anyway,tata for now!*no offense Panda Girl^^0*
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Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 14, 2002 10:38 CST
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This is good, please add more so I can see what happens next?!! |
Reviewed By: Sakura22 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 15:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this was funny! I hope you write more! I hope that wasn't the real ending, though. I'm so sorry for Yami Yugi!
Kaiba forever!
(I believe in the heart of the cards!) |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2002 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Suh-weet! OMG! I want to know what's gonna happen! Write more!!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =) |
