| "Naughty Kitty Theaters II: Assault of the Astro Junkies" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Shippo_Dudes_not_sighed in name On: October 10, 2007 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow you still have it good luck with the new season im ready for it ( got a barf bag and some sleeping pills just incase) but I should be fine theres still nothing here I can't handle but its gotten close last season anyways Iv post pairings on the old sereise undar shippo_Dude im to lazy to sighn on but I still have some new pairing here they are: 1) any combo of starters (mudkip/cindiquil/squirtal or what ever) 2) rapidash or ponytaw/Joy 3) rape any caricture with a swarm of beedrill (I want a good laugh) 4)have some totaly out of size pokemon with a bunch of girls (Dragonknight/girls of your choise) 5) take all the carrictures you don't want used anymore and kill them in some horbile, grusom, Bloodfilled fic were they ALL die. (no more asking for them now. problam solved!)
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Reviewed By: Dark.Mystery On: September 21, 2007 16:25 CDT
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They already have a Flannery and Typhlosion pairing on Adultfanfiction.net. I got nothing on the other pairing.
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Reviewed By: Tem On: September 15, 2007 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kinky. I like it. I have a suggestion. Flannery x her Grandfather's Typhlosion & Jasmine x Volkner.
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Reviewed By: Dark.Mystery On: September 03, 2007 08:18 CDT
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Very well I guess I can forgive you, so long as stories come a bit faster then once every 2 months. Now the story was interesting, a 13 year old and a 40 something year old together is definately a good story, pure desires and forbiddenness(if thats a word). Im still wondering about the May/Blaziken story, but you got other things your writing also.
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Title: PLEASE WRITE SOMETHING!!!
Reviewed By: Dark.Mystery On: August 18, 2007 20:31 CDT
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE SOMETHING PLEASE!!! I need something to read, I cant hold out with my own ideas. Ive gone over my original pairing ideas too many times and some new ones too many times. Ive read the original NKT a few times. Ive exosted everyother fanfiction site their is with pokemon in them. WRITE SOMETHING NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark.Mystery On: July 27, 2007 09:10 CDT
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Shadow the author only does parings that are unusual and you have like 30 Ash/Lance stories on here which shows the paring is not unusual. The ideas I have submitted have no stories on them or for one case one story(which really sucked). Besides he isnt doing any Ash stories anymore, or any other major characters unless theyre in the diamond/pearl thing. Now I want to know what is taking so long with the next story. I know you are busy, but its pretty much been a month. You better not have died on us or gotten lost at that convension you went to.
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Reviewed By: shadowphantomness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 01:15 CDT
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Yo! I'd personally like to see Ash with Lance, preferably with Ash being heck a confused and Lance being evilly manipulative or something... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Joedan On: July 01, 2007 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This was great! I completely love it! I just finished reading your other fic, and thats was superb. Although, I'd like to see a Charmander/May or Pikachu/May. Maybe even a May/Gary/Pikachu threesome? Just a thought.
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Reviewed By: Dark Mystery On: June 27, 2007 19:58 CDT
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Well I was just on vacation and I come back to find this. When I saw the idea for the first story I just couldnt believe anyone would try something so sick and evil, it was quite nice. It blows my mind how you can write this shit, as long as you keep with the good pairings then you will be having a great season of NKT. Now just to remind you, you promised a May/Blaziken fic. Also I had my suggestion for a fic with Hikari(Dawn) and either Lucario, Toxicroak or Electivire in the form of a review of the first NKT. Finally I have a new idea for the following pairing and it also fits cause its an all pokemon which you havent done yet. It is Mew(Female)/Celebi(Female)/Jirachi(Male)/Manaphy(Male) which I came up with around the end of my vacation. Well in short the fic was good and here are my ideas for future fics.
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Reviewed By: IcefireQueen On: June 26, 2007 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your first season & I'm to see you back. I can't wait to see what you have in store for us.
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Reviewed By: DramaIsOverRated On: June 25, 2007 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the first season and I'm excited for this one!!! I'd love to see Charmander/Charzard screw Ash. Now that would be a sight to see.
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