| "Freak Show" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: June 20, 2002 09:43 CDT
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I wrote da statement above so if u want 2 e-mail me about it u can @ Shateera40@hotmail.com thanx for ur time. And I have wrote a fanfic incase u're wondering. Just not @ mm.org, but ff.net |
Reviewed By: Shateera40 On: June 20, 2002 09:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
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The reason I gave u such low ratings is because u are forcing events in, forcing Bulma 2 be really strong and that's not really interesting. I mean everything happens so fast, and it's weird. I'm not flammin, but ur story could be alot betta sweet heart. I mean it's like every other Vegetasei fic I've read about Bulma being a Saiyan except worse. I hope u don't take it the wrong way or anything, becuz I'm tellin u the truth. So, if u take this as a flame then go ahead and do that, but It's not. I'm a fan of ur otha fics and stuff, just keepin it real and straight up tellin ya. I'm not a very arrogant person or nothin, so hope ya don't feel offended by this. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter On: June 17, 2002 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word for this story....AWESOME...Radical...you know, those old freaky words that people still say when they're at a loss. Anyway...*coughcough* I liked this story and can't wait for the next chapter to come out. |
Reviewed By: danieloflorien [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 18:34 CDT
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hey...this is an original fic...I'd like to see more of it |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 11:05 CDT
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LOL 'Congratulation Nappa, you have a daughter.' LOL thats just funny to hear someone say that. hehe. but im loving this fic. may i plz read more? thx |
Reviewed By: Harial On: June 17, 2002 10:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!! More!!!
~Harial |
