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| "Seeds" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: O.O . . . Hawt . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon (not logged in) On: September 12, 2007 09:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please forgive my spelling and the short review. Anyway, I loved the style, very alliterate, almost like reading a play. And it was wonderful just listening to the tone of the words, like everything was subdued and hushed, and you really didn't want to disturb what was going on. It was a little enlightening, shifting the expected by 90 degrees to the left, so that we got a different story that still fits perfectly with the Canon we know. I think I fell in love all over again. And the last line was ridiculously sweet. Please keep writing forever.
| Reviewed By: animegeek22 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god.... That messed with me so much... in a good way..... I felt like I was floating as I read the one-shot. Though I still think Roxas owns Axel, Sora has done so much for Axel, too... :3 So beautiful.... *tear tear*
| Reviewed By: LuckyLeo28 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done. A perfectly genuine example of a well written one shot. I've truly enjoyed it.
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