| "The Resembool Ninjas" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: disturbed_mediocrity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this, although I did spot a few spelling and grammatical errors. I'm looking forward to an update.
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Title: OMG UPDATE!!!
Reviewed By: J + AZZ = Jazz lol On: July 15, 2007 23:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have to update this fanfic. I absolutely love it!! I was really into it and i pratically had my eyes attached to the screen of my computer while reading. LOl. Dont forget to update. Ja ne ^_^
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Title: SWWWEEEET!
Reviewed By: Maggie_Masters On: July 10, 2007 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I hope you keep writting this. It is so nice to see a fic up that has been properly editted. (As in there were no glaring gramatical mistakes and the stroy read smoothly) I really enjoyed the plot line developing and the foreshadowing.... oh the foreshadowing!!!! Please... I can't wait until you update!!!!!
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Title: Wacky
Reviewed By: Wacky [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that the idea was verywell executed for having Sakura train three ninja (the Metal Alchemist Gang). It is good to see that the Sakura character from the Naruto series have some spotlight time. While not my favorite character like the author I do hate it when main characters are ignored and only used to for support of others. Only thing that I would have done differently was change Sakura's motivation for staying in Resembool. She's a well trained ninja that wouldn't just stay because she thought some kids would make good ninjas--training them because she was using ninja powers in front of the kids (not understanding the culture shock) and having them want to have her show how its done is more plausable. This does not demean the story or concept at all. Its only the first chapter and I look forward to reading the chapters as they follow. Sign-- Wacky
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