| "Resistance" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: kkjade On: September 28, 2003 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool story you going to write more
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Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2002 18:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
FINISH! >__ |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 19:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
The addition of the tail will be touched upon in later chapters. So never fear, your question will indeed be answered! |
Reviewed By: animeman [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2002 06:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good and funny i really enjoyed it update ASAP. also when did vejitta grow a tail? because i can tell that this is before the androids arrived but in that 3 yr training area |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ha. What a bet. Hee hee, well now that you're finally done the prologue, can u write chapters now?? and put the 3 prologues into one?? |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 09:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
MM-hhmm, m-hhhmm, m-hmm, this is the BEST STORY EVER! No, not really. But PLEEZ REVIEW! See how desperate I am? I'm reviewing MYSELF! But anyway, thanx aLe, Silenced, Lonely Angel, and Serendipity SO MUCH for reviewing! Prologue: Part III is all for you! |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2002 11:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
haha. That was funny. I would be sooo embarassed if I was in her perdicament. I mean he was standing right there! haha. *smile* I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Lonely Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 21:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I know really OMG!!!! Shit that's funny! You so have to update ASAP! I wanna see what Vegeta says. |
Reviewed By: Silenced [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2002 12:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its good, cant wait to read more |
Reviewed By: aLe On: June 20, 2002 11:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I think its a good start, but you need to continue because the story right now does not say anything. Until you write the next chapter that is. Writing the next chapters quickly will give the sense to the story. But it's good so keep up the good work. I'll keep checking on updates!! |
