| "Heart Shaped Locket" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: BrokenAngel1219 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 02:39 CDT
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omg. the ending is so sad. i like your writing, but i'm sorry to say that i don't like the story. i see hojo has a completly shallow person that either doesn't get the hint when he's not wanted around or understands the hints, but chooses to ignore them. this story kinda made kagome seem heartless when it came to inuyasha. yea, i understand that it had been 10 years, but if she truly loves him like i believe she does, she would have waited no matter what. that, or die of a broken heart like inuyasha did. i'm sorry, but i can't get use to the idea of kagome and inuyasha not ending up together in the end.
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Reviewed By: inuyashafan4-ever33 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this story. it is soooooo sad that inuyasha dies. i agree that with unistar. that there should be a sequel or something with kagome's reaction. awesome writing. keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 16:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
nice but sad story... any chance for a one shot sequel for this... maybe Kagome's reaction and feelings when she found out that Inuyasha died?... just a wishful suggestion... great writing though...
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Reviewed By: InuAndKag4Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 21:54 CDT
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that was SOOOO depressing...i didn't like it sorry...i can NOT have inuyasha die....and kagome not with him! it's just wrong! good wrighting though!
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