| "Falling Is Like This" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: I remember u writing this story
Reviewed By: Magical Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
la la la im just gonna leave random drabble because u know my opinion
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Reviewed By: RaiMidori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 15:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
For the third chapter: That was great! Wonderful choice of words and everything. Gabatte, that was too touching!
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Reviewed By: RaiMidori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 18:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cute! The second half filled in a lot of narrative holes, I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: RaiMidori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2007 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... if you're not going to write a second half, I would recommend that you rewrite the ending or just do a bit of editing. I'm not a hardcore yaoi fan, but, since it feels like the fanfic is going that way, it would be nice to have some kind of satisfactory ending. Your characterization is quite well done, and I loved the narrative a lot! Well done ^_^
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