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"Goku's First Haircuts" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ]
 Reviewed By: SaiyanGirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 06, 2003 14:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Goku's not older, Krillin is. I think. I wonder if Goku would like a...bananna.
(Thud)
SaiyanGirl:(turns to see Vegeta had fallen down anime style.) (sweatdrops) sorry about that. Vegeta's being a moron. I did some magic on him.
(Grins evilly)

Vegeta:(Shoots up from the floor) I'll show you moron..(advances on her)

SaiyanGirl:Bananna.

Vegeta:(falls to the ground with a thud)

SaiyanGirl: Yep! everytime I say that word, Vegeta falls down. Its like Kagome saying, "Sit!"

Vegeta:(falls again)

SaiyanGirl:(hits herself on the forehead) Whoops! can't say that either. see, I can't say those two words or Vegeta will fall down and go...BOOM! (giggles) Sorry for making you fall monkeyboy!

Vegeta:*groans*
 Reviewed By: kookie  On: June 20, 2002 00:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was very very cute! and in character too!
great job!

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