| "Sacrifice" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Neko Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 11:46 CST
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its getting good. wonder what itachis going to think about the condition that narutos in.please update soon
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Reviewed By: Neko Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 06:21 CST
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I would really like to find out more. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: PITA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2007 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent work, this story get better and better!! I love the detail and the presence of an actual plot. I really look forward to the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: RaiMidori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 16:38 CDT
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Yup, yup! But there's always a fine line betweem attempting to bring new character to him and actually being able to do it. You're the latter ^_~ If you need a bigger audience, you should really try publishing this fanfic at fanfiction[dot]net. (If that didn't show up, it's a website) They have a very large community, and I'm positive you'll get at least double the hits and reviews. With talent like yours, it makes reading fanfiction truly wholesome. You did a great job with Kyuubi. I've never attempted to understand him and always chalked him down as another of those belligerent badies. Here, you illustrate a deeper, secret side to him that I just can't get enough of. There's something about your writing that spins magic from words. It's amazing.
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Reviewed By: rua kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2007 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was amazing. one of the best fics i have read in quite a while. i cant wait for more ;)
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Reviewed By: RaiMidori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 15:27 CDT
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Aha, it's all true ^_^. I absolutely loved this chapter. It pleases me to no ends to see a softer side to Itachi, even when it's for self-preservation. You did an amazing job with it- it's subtle and not OOC. Flawless!
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Reviewed By: RaiMidori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2007 09:12 CDT
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5th chapter: My, my. That was untterly engrossing, a titillating , radiant tale spun from a well-polished author. Reading 'Sacrifice' has become a neccesity for me- the lyrical prose that buffets the mind acts as a medicine of sorts for Naruto-deprived readers. Please continue writing, it would be a shame not to!
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Reviewed By: trulywicked [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(whimpers) I neeeeeeed to read more! Seriously I was bummed when I realized that there were just four chapters so far. I'm completely engrossed and already addicted to this fic.
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Title: Amazing writting skills
Reviewed By: Mirena [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must said this story is amazingly well written a bit too embellished for my taste I had to look some words over but still amazing. I am at lost at Narutos constant visits at the Kyuubi is he imprisoned or what. Love the Kyuubi. I really loved the chapter on Itachi, playing the double agent to keep the kyuubi save but you got to get a hell of a plot to explain the kill the whole clan thing to protect. Pocky rules ;-) I even gave it a chapter in a fic of mine a while ago.
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Reviewed By: RaiMidori [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was completely spellbound by this. I loved it until the very last word, your lyrical prose was enchanting! You've been favourited and so has the story, I look forward to reading more! I never used to be a yaoi fan, so at first, I just opened this story up to skim through, a quality-test of sorts. But I was so enraptured that I never realized I had read chapter after chapter until there were no more to read! I can't express my gratitude in words for people like you who write so magnificently that it's a true pleasure to read their works.
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Reviewed By: Smari-chan On: July 23, 2007 12:49 CDT
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O.O NARUTO! awsome job on writing the first chapter, I'm sure that the rest will be as amasing as this one was. update soon. :- )
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Reviewed By: BakurasAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 02:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a very well written fanfic so far and I cannot wait to read more! It's very detailed and I love how you desribed Kyuubi-san! Keep writing please!
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Reviewed By: PITA [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SH*T this is an amazingly done done first chapter. I really really really hope you continue this story, the description and detail are breath taking. The spelling and grammer are also perfect and I thank you for making such an enjoyable story.
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Reviewed By: Tenisha-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2007 10:12 CDT
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Hmmmmm. Very interesting. Poor Poor Naruto. I hope you updat ethis very soon. Please it is very good. A very good story.
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