| "Mental Fitness" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: sylenctone [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 09:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Heh, You certainly have a handle on Wu's personality! I really like your style of writing. The clipped, terse nature of it really does suit Wufei's character. I look forward to reading more of your fics!
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Reviewed By: Storm Queen On: July 29, 2007 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. You've got the gift. I would have liked to see some of the questions, but it makes the reader think a little. I liked it a lot.
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Reviewed By: Random Chaos On: July 24, 2007 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was very well executed. And I enjoyed it a immensely. If perhaps, you feel the need to write Yuy's views on things, I would enjoy reading that as well. On a review sort of note, I only notice a few typos, that did not distract from the story. Just wait a day or two after writing a paper, and prof-read it again. I use that trick on papers and such.
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: July 24, 2007 09:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was very good. You did an excellent job keeping Wufei in character while making the story entertaining and funny (the last bit about being polite and kitchen utensils). The bits describing his relationship with Heero are just cute and make me smile, even if they aren't in love.
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