| "Orange Star High School...School of DBZ" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2002 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Vin Diesel is a human god! With all those muscles... I gotta go see his new movie when it comes out.
Great story, and new chapter. *smile* That was a cute scene too. Veggie and Bulma make such a cute cupple! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: July 02, 2002 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv this chapter,but I was hoping Bulma&Vegeta would kiss in it. ~Sighs~ Oh,well. Can't wait 4 da next chappie!!! Yay!!!!lol. I'm crazy. |
Reviewed By: Shateera40@hotmail.com On: June 27, 2002 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I gave you 10 all da way cuz this chappie was off da chain and I can't wait til da next chappie hits gurl!!!! Do da damn thang!!! Keep it real gurl!lol. I'm out. |
Reviewed By: holly On: June 23, 2002 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! I'm just to eager to read the next chapter so please hurry up!
One of the rare school-stories, which isn't loughable!!! |
Reviewed By: shateera40@hotmail.com On: June 20, 2002 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I luved it!!!lol. And I gave u and 7 for writing cuz it was ghetto! I luv slang! It's so cool, and natural 4 me! And I LUV randb so...... Hope dis fic is gonna have sume in it!!!!!!lol. shay so holla back short`e |
