| "The Host Club United" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Gullible Muffin On: March 11, 2008 22:10 CDT
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Oh, wow! I'm pretty darn impressed by this. You seem to have caught the dynamics of the characters' feelings and interactions really well. I love the sadness you evoke when you talk about the fleeting aspects of their relationship, and I REALLY love your focus on the joy that can still be found in its present impermanence. Well done you. ^^
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: AlloLola [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2007 23:35 CST
Comment/Review:
I really loved it! It's very... pensive (is that the right word?) I can't think of how to compliment it, but it's just so good
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Reviewed By: tonz27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 09:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was a tear jerker.
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: konnichiwa_stars On: July 31, 2007 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this was an absolutely amazing story!!! I loved it. It was emotional and deep. It was short and sweet and I just wanted it to go on but after it ended I was left with a satisfying feeling of sadness... poignant and rememberable. Beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Ebonyguitarchic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good story. I think it touched me emotionally and really shows the connection between the group. Umm for constructive criticism the only thing I can think of is that your writing style kinda switched up in the end. You kinda delved into a narrative style of writing that went along with the story but took away from it a little. But it was still awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: TsunadeHokage [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it, it was cute but sad. I think you should either put it in psychological or angst as the second catagory.
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