Title: Hey Reviewed By:Tetsu Shatarii [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 18:45 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Hey you didnt give me any credit for giving you the idea. That hurts man. Over all it was pretty good. However even though it was a One Shot it could have been longer. If you do continue on this one dont let Within Broken Ties slip. Anyway good story.
Reviewed By: deadwreckaning On: July 27, 2007 19:30 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: not bad i think that you should cuontinue on with this one as a story.deadwreckaning out
