| "The Battle against Mary Sue" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: MUAHAHAHAH!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Iris_Sun [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! Although my attention didn't let me read anything past Kaiba's plan I loved it! Mary-sues and... oh... I know what the make versions are...Gary-Joes? John-Does? Something like that.... should all be put to sleep!
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Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2002 21:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cm: GO GO GO GO! Terminate all the god damn Mary-sues!
Aki: (pouts) You wanna terminate me too?
Cm: (thinks) Yes! I didn't hate you that much until ESP cousin chose you as the Mary-sue. Natalina go kick the mary-sue arses!
Aki: No fair! I'm going to get killed and beat up!? (glares at ESP cousin)
Mad: ^__^0 Continue! Never stop the Mary-sue terminating squad! |
Reviewed By: setobsessed On: July 18, 2002 13:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool! |
Reviewed By: Setos Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 08:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
good story! keep writing chapters! its really interesting |
Reviewed By: Brockiepoo15 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 13:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I WANT SEQUEL!!!!!! IT'S TOO GOOD!!!! Keep it up!!
-Brockiepoo15 PikaRppr1 =) |
Reviewed By: Lili [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing was pretty good, but in the frst chapter, you should've just had her desription in the first paragraph when Natalie was introduced. The spelling and grammar was good though. The Creativity is 4 since Natalie is a *gulp* mary-sue. Mary Sues are characters that are perfect, pretty, had a tragic past, and gets to have a lot of guys, or just one main guy she really likes. Mary Sues are just perfect, and I'd have to say. Perfect is booring. It's better to try your best than being the best. That's what always say. I didn't enjoy it that much, but that was pretty good. The overall is 5. That's a pretty good fic, once you improve it a little, it will be great! Just don't have Natalie as a mary sue and put up some more ideas that make people enjoy it more.
PS. I might have some typos, but that's because of my computer since I keep having to retype things when the letter does not come out. |
